Day Goes On

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Stuck in the wilderness of my own world
Trapped & stuck, wound up in a ball all hurled
An explosive mind, damaged & full of scars
A sudden burst and it shot up into the stars
Lost my way, lost my train of thought
Alone at earth, myself was whom i fought
Silence, a non-audible sense of being
So calm & so mellow, yet such a hollow feeling
My eyes opened, & vision was cleared
Just a mindful mirage, in the distance you reappeared.

2 comments:

Mz. Sushay said...

omg.. this ones nice Avi.. mamma like :P its so cute n romantic.. not really but i like it.. the last sentence just gives it a mad touch.. how long does it take u to do? genius!

keep it up dawwgg!

nawww i hope u rite me a poem one day! haha.. siff

MWAh tc! xO. ;)

mali-koa . said...

this one's amazing. I love it avi, your lyrical genius never ceases to amaze - i feel like in heaps of ways I can relate to this, probably not in the same way you meant it to be recieved, but I find it oh so appealing . Putting it on my myspace and linking to your page <3