White Canvas

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Spare a thought, for the one that cares
No point now dwelling, on times once shared
Illustrating myself on a blank piece of paper
I attempt to draw but i just can't seem to shape her
Creating space for something better and greater
Erasing her sooner rather than later
Strokes of assurance, colours so spontaneous
An Art of me , and a clearance of someone extraneous.



For that anonymous commenter and my only commenter, you have talent hit me up on my msn and send me some of your stuff eager to read :)

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

who me? couldnt be. then who?
nah its me. =] hahaha.

i liked that one alot cuz, i dnt knw why. cant relly explaain it. u kept it simple, kept the rhyme simple, but its still god damn memorable. combination of ur imagination and ur experiences in life make u a talent hard to tame. let the beast out.
amazed me once again.

GOOD SHIT CUZ! in simple words. hahaha

take care man.

Anonymous said...

you never cease to amaze me .

Anonymous said...

aviiii !
i loveeeeeee this
and seeing as i know what its about i think it is amazing :)
your writing is so good ! i could never do something like this
im proud :)
everything will get better.. trust me !!!!
i loveeeeeee u
<3 suzie

Anonymous said...

WOWweee Avvviii !
u got skills niggaa
and keep dem poems coming i really enjoy readin em.
u gOt nice flow in writing poems duude
;)
Sushi lOvee'sz it <3

mwah
xo.

Anonymous said...

awww mili loves it =)

Anonymous said...

i love you bro :) u know who it is .




hint hint * cambodian breast milk

Anonymous said...

just a random passing by.
i am loving your pieces of writing.
how long have you been writing for?
it's all quite inspirational.
all the best and may nothing come in the way of your flow of words.
God bless.

m.